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feedback please

PostPosted: Fri May 06, 2016 1:37 pm
by Ikyoto
Draft of my version of red riding hood. Grainy, yes, but it;s draft.

Colors? the red hood obviously must stay. but I can adjust just about everything. Opinions?

red 0001.jpg

Re: feedback please

PostPosted: Fri May 06, 2016 2:18 pm
by SciFiFisher
I would make her slightly more athletic looking. Not bulky muscular but more lithe and acrobatic looking without the skeletal appearance that some gymnasts have. She does have to evade the Big Bad Wolf long enough for the Woodsman to arrive. Lips should be slightly more pink (not red). Be sure to put her in stiletto heels so she can trip just before the Woodsman arrives with his axe. ;) :P

Re: feedback please

PostPosted: Sat May 07, 2016 10:14 am
by SciFi Chick
It's lovely, but the crown on her forehead makes her look more like Wonder Woman... and that could be a nice melding actually...

Re: feedback please

PostPosted: Sat May 07, 2016 1:37 pm
by Ikyoto
SciFi Chick wrote:It's lovely, but the crown on her forehead makes her look more like Wonder Woman... and that could be a nice melding actually...

So, smAller headgear, tone ger up and give her an axe so she can tell the Huntsman to fuck off. Got it.

Re: feedback please

PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2016 9:17 pm
by Swift
She looks inhumanly skinny in the waist and hips, unless I'm misinterpreting something. I think my brain interprets the dark part of her bodice as her body, and the red part as an open cape, but then I'm thinking that maybe the red part is form fitting, and her hips are really as wide as the red part. But I can't tell for sure.

The face and neck are very well done.

Re: feedback please

PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2016 11:29 pm
by code monkey
Swift wrote:She looks inhumanly skinny in the waist and hips, unless I'm misinterpreting something. I think my brain interprets the dark part of her bodice as her body, and the red part as an open cape, but then I'm thinking that maybe the red part is form fitting, and her hips are really as wide as the red part. But I can't tell for sure.

The face and neck are very well done.


I had the same thoughts. the red is clearly the cape at the shoulders but it's not at all clear when one comes to the waist & hips. either interpretation looks wrong.