Draft of my version of red riding hood. Grainy, yes, but it;s draft.
Colors? the red hood obviously must stay. but I can adjust just about everything. Opinions?
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by Ikyoto » Fri May 06, 2016 1:37 pm
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Re: feedback please
by SciFiFisher » Fri May 06, 2016 2:18 pm
I would make her slightly more athletic looking. Not bulky muscular but more lithe and acrobatic looking without the skeletal appearance that some gymnasts have. She does have to evade the Big Bad Wolf long enough for the Woodsman to arrive. Lips should be slightly more pink (not red). Be sure to put her in stiletto heels so she can trip just before the Woodsman arrives with his axe. 
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by SciFi Chick » Sat May 07, 2016 10:14 am
It's lovely, but the crown on her forehead makes her look more like Wonder Woman... and that could be a nice melding actually...
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Re: feedback please
by Ikyoto » Sat May 07, 2016 1:37 pm
SciFi Chick wrote:It's lovely, but the crown on her forehead makes her look more like Wonder Woman... and that could be a nice melding actually...
So, smAller headgear, tone ger up and give her an axe so she can tell the Huntsman to fuck off. Got it.
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Re: feedback please
by Swift » Tue May 10, 2016 9:17 pm
She looks inhumanly skinny in the waist and hips, unless I'm misinterpreting something. I think my brain interprets the dark part of her bodice as her body, and the red part as an open cape, but then I'm thinking that maybe the red part is form fitting, and her hips are really as wide as the red part. But I can't tell for sure.
The face and neck are very well done.
The face and neck are very well done.
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Re: feedback please
by code monkey » Tue May 10, 2016 11:29 pm
Swift wrote:She looks inhumanly skinny in the waist and hips, unless I'm misinterpreting something. I think my brain interprets the dark part of her bodice as her body, and the red part as an open cape, but then I'm thinking that maybe the red part is form fitting, and her hips are really as wide as the red part. But I can't tell for sure.
The face and neck are very well done.
I had the same thoughts. the red is clearly the cape at the shoulders but it's not at all clear when one comes to the waist & hips. either interpretation looks wrong.
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